ok I love this but you have to take it slow do one chapter at a time also your six is pretty good
can I try to do chapter 7 just to see if I could make it good?

lemme finish the rest first, also, I did 7, you can try tho ig

yeah but I thought it could be better

Welp... I think BB22 got banned...

He said some anti-Ukraine stuff and now I can't find his account...

He had it coming to be fair... 😕

here is seven I kept bricks and bones secret (notice I never mentioned him or the house they were at once) just to keep suspense

As the two pulled up to the house they were amazed as they stood in awe the house was TRASHED there was holes from the attic to the floor level it reeked of an indescribable foul smell. Glass was scattered everywhere on the driveway trash flew in the cold nights breeze.

Seb- I hope he is all right
Justy- expect the worst

As they walked up to the door it fell back hitting the glass covered floor with a loud bang as they creeped in they saw that the house was riddled with mice they were all over the place one even made himself at home in a box of reese’s puffs while another was eating through a Air Force 1 and had what looked like a dolls head stuck to his tail.

Justy- lets hurry you go and check in his room while I check his basement
Seb- got it

Seb creeped up the two flights of stairs and when he reached the top he observed that just about everything was flipped upside down or covered in a disgusting black fuzz “probably mold” he thought to himself. As he walked into the room the floors creaked and shifted then he noticed something on the bed. It was a leather journal the front said TIME IS RUNNING OUT as he flipped and scrolled through the pages he saw that one of the pages was marked MAY 9 2022 Sante fe the date seemed familiar. When he saw that no one was in the room he left and went back down the stairs.

Meanwhile Justy sprinted down the stairs as he heard a muffled yelp when he reached the bottom of the stairs he saw a big room with a side closet, there was no furniture but a flipped table as soon as he saw that table he noticed under it was a extremely pale man. “It’s him” he thought. As his heart raced he flip the table and grabbed the pale man, hoisted him on his back and raced up the flight of stairs. And out the door, Seb was already at the car. As Justy opened the back door he threw the man in, after doing that he ran to the front door of the car opened it and got in.

Seb- Oh my gosh you found him
Justy- yeah he was out cold under a table
Seb -hurry up and drive
Justy- ok ok

As he put the key in and stared the car it sputtered then started. When they drove down only a block they found a legion of bots menacingly waiting for them.

it's good, however, I prefer they get captured, it help connect to the final battle

maybe tweak the ending a bit, other than that, perfecto

thanks

oh, btw, I made me anti matter fig public so u could see how I made it. Basically the more of the blue showing, the more powerful they are.

https://www.mecabricks.com/en/models/mLvzOZYBaAw here the link

Why would BAB be in house captured? I do not get it. Can you leave him alone, FOR NOW!!!! Just use DuckGuz. Please!!! I’m sorry if I’m being mildly annoying. But we decided DuckDuckGuz first. Just maybe use him instead please.

house was destroyed ig, also, you first came up with the idea, babs was just unidentified in your version. That's one small edit I did when I wrote my draft. most of my part 7 is based on yours

Seb gave us the idea of DuckDuckGuz first by the way. And I’d rather use a new character.

Side note, what if I recreated the "They Dont Know" meme in LEGO then submitted it to LEGO Ideas?

Okay, it has honestly been a rather mediocre day for me. Okay, how about we make DDG and BAB live right next to each other. Does that sound like a good idea to anybody? Also, I’m not really a person that likes to swear unlike everybody in my school unfortunately. How about maybe, we could probably make this a rather blind war. 😆 I do kind love the idea of that though. 😃 But can we maybe limit ourselves to one episode at a time too, before we get distracted and lose track? I do think we could maybe have a plan, but not get too detailed. Also, I just more prefer DDG for the role. I’d more prefer a hooded mandalorian than a undead character. But please, listen to past Seb. He suggested it first though. Who prefers a hooded mandalorian or an undead guy. No rude responses just vote instead.

Then we'd have to edit the first model/ part. Go look at the first part that seb made.

Babs was always involved sense the beginning

I'm not saying we can't add ddg, but we cant remove Babs halfway into the series.

I said, he could appear again later. Not completely remove him.

And yes, I know. I’m stubborn.

And also, I do think an adobe-modern house would make kind of make sense for a mandalorian, (I know he isn’t a mandalorian but who cares, it makes him look cool, 😆😁) since mandalorian’s live on a desert world. You know, if you’ve ever watched the clone wars.