Sebachie Vs Negachie story forum
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I mean in the model (when it comes out)

Or you can make the model for part 7

Wait till I publish part 6 tho

ok I will publish it 1-2 days after six comes out

Oh also, I had to slightly edit your 7 draft because it should've said truck instead of car, also some grammatical errors, everything else is untouched, I'd used this one (imma send it as a separate message)

As the two pulled up to the house they were amazed as they stood in awe the house was TRASHED there were holes from the attic to the floor level it reeked of an indescribable foul smell. Glass was scattered everywhere on the driveway, trash flew in the cold night's breeze.

Seb- I hope he is all right
Justy- expect the worst

As they walked up to the door it fell back hitting the glass covered floor with a loud bang as they creeped in they saw that the house was riddled with mice they were all over the place one even made himself at home in a box of reese’s puffs while another was eating through a Air Force 1 and had what looked like a dolls head stuck to his tail.

Justy- let's hurry you go and check in his room while I check his basement
Seb- got it

Seb creeped up the two flights of stairs and when he reached the top he observed that just about everything was flipped upside down or covered in a disgusting black fuzz “probably mold” he thought to himself. As he walked into the room the floors creaked and shifted then he noticed something on the bed. It was a leather journal the front said TIME IS RUNNING OUT as he flipped and scrolled through the pages he saw that one of the pages was marked MAY 7 2022 Sante fe the date seemed familiar. When he saw that no one was in the room he left and went back down the stairs.

Meanwhile Justy sprinted down the stairs as he heard a muffled groan when he reached the bottom of the stairs he saw a big room with a side closet, there was no furniture but a flipped table as soon as he saw that table he saw under it was an extremely pale man. “It’s him,” he thought. As his heart raced he flipped the table and grabbed the pale man, hoisted him on his back and raced up the flight of stairs. And out the door, Seb was already at the truck. Justy opened the back door and threw the Babs in, after doing that he ran to the door of the truck, opened it and got in.

Seb- Oh my gosh you found him
Justy- yeah he was out cold under a table
Seb -hurry up and drive
Justy- ok ok

As he put the key in and stared the truckit sputtered then stopped.

Seb- why just why?
Justy- hold on I may be able to started again

When Justy was attempting to start the car there was a loud knock on the window it was a police officer clothed in a normal uniform, as justy scrolled down the window the cop said:

cop- hey sunshine

Then the cop pulled out a foot long gas can and sprayed the truck feverishly. Justy and Seb tried to open the doors but they stayed shut. It was no use the two coughed and coughed before falling into a deep, deep slumber.

and here's an Idea, maybe the cop Is a fake cop whos actually a bot, but we never are told this, by we I mean the audience.

thanks for the edit, and I was already thinking about having the cop a bot but I think we should make him a hired worker for whoever the bad guy is (I forgot his name)

Negachie, yeah I like that idea. Almost said odea haahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhaahahahahahhhhhahahhahahaahahhaahhahahashhahahaahahahahahahahaahwahwwewettrghgfdsdfhyawerfgkigyh6jk bhnbhnmfjtn7brhmhahahahahaahahahahahahhahaahahhhahaahahahahahhaahhahahahahahaahahhaahhaahhahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaahahhahaahahahahahahahahahahsuirjesudfudsahahahahahahahahuiovsofbg fk jh4hjhkhaahahahahaahhahaahahahhahahaahahhahahahaaha

Alrighty, does anybody possibly have any ideas for any other episodes? 😕

I do have a flashback episode focusing on the origins of the characters who don't have any. I have suggested that idea in the past. But could that be the job for the spinoffs? 😕

Not spinoffs, but rather sequels/prequels, and yes, that would be preferred. Each character in this series will get there own ending that will lead up to their own story. My plan is for sebs ending to be the western duel. You see, in part 10, they're sent back in time when Negachie presses the bottom.

Well alright, but does he live? 😕 But yeah, sequels and prequels is probably a better describing word for that. 😃

I would start righting you endings before we say we're done.

The story is made to make the audience think he's dead, but no. The war kinda changes locations and times, Seb does eventually win tho.

Well alright. But I do think I have an idea for a user to appear with me. But shh. . . It is a secret. . . 🔒

Okay, nevermind, it is HungryPlant! 😃

Also, do you think we could write the conclusions ourselves? 😕

your own conclusion yes, that would be much better. You can start now, but dont publish yet, If you look at the hub description there is a release order, follow that.

Alright, but the sending back in time affect everybody? 😕 Oh wait nevermind.

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